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OMG!! Aim to Control Amber, but Marc Say No, Wait for NGO Retreatment, 1 Percent Hope, Look Flies
The hot afternoon air hung heavy over the sanctuary, the kind of heat that slowed even the most energetic monkeys. But for Amber, the young female macaque, it wasn’t just the temperature that weighed on her—it was the tension building around her situation.
Amber had been rescued months ago, but she still carried deep scars, both physical and emotional. Her leg had never fully healed after an old injury, and her temperament swung wildly between trust and panic. The keepers had been debating whether to start a new round of behavioral training to help her integrate with the others.
“Aim to control her now,” muttered one of the senior handlers under his breath, his eyes fixed on Amber, who was crouched in the corner of her enclosure, tail twitching. “If we don’t, she’ll never adapt.”
Marc, the head caretaker, stood nearby, arms folded, watching the scene closely. He was calm, deliberate, the kind of person who thought twice before making any move with the animals. His dark eyes shifted from Amber to the handler, and his voice came out firm:
“No.”
The single word carried weight, silencing the rest of the small group. “We’ve rushed too many times before,” Marc continued. “If we push her now, we could break what little trust she has. We wait for the NGO’s retreatment program. They know her history better than anyone.”
The others glanced at each other. The NGO team was scheduled to return in a few weeks, bringing medical staff and behavioral experts. But a few weeks felt like an eternity for those eager to see progress.
Marc stepped closer to Amber’s enclosure. She watched him carefully, her big amber eyes reflecting suspicion. She didn’t run, but she didn’t approach either. Around her, flies circled lazily, landing on the metal bars and on the half-eaten fruit in the corner. Marc noticed the way she twitched her ears every time one landed on her—subtle signs of stress most people wouldn’t see.
“There’s still hope,” Marc said softly, almost to himself. “Even if it’s only one percent.”
The others didn’t reply, but that single percent meant everything to him. He had seen animals bounce back from far worse—given time, patience, and the right approach. Amber’s spirit wasn’t gone; it was just buried deep under layers of fear.
The handler who had pushed for control shook his head. “One percent isn’t much.”
Marc’s jaw tightened. “It’s enough.”
That night, Marc stayed later than usual. The sanctuary had fallen into the quiet hum of evening—crickets outside the walls, the occasional rustle from the trees, and the soft, almost rhythmic sound of Amber grooming herself in the shadows. Marc sat near her enclosure, reading through the NGO’s past notes about her.
It painted a picture of a monkey who had endured more than most: loss of her troop, a broken leg from a trap, and months in isolation before rescue. The flies that now buzzed lazily around her were nothing compared to the swarms of challenges she had faced before.
He remembered the day she first arrived, trembling so violently they feared she might collapse. Back then, she wouldn’t make eye contact at all. Now, at least, she looked at him. That was progress, even if small.
Amber tilted her head, watching Marc in the dim light. He slowly extended a piece of ripe mango through the bars, resting it on the ledge so she could take it without fear of being touched. She hesitated, eyes flicking between the fruit and his face. After a long pause, she reached out, took it, and retreated back to her corner.
Marc smiled faintly. It wasn’t a breakthrough, but it was something. The one percent hope was alive.
As he gathered his things to leave, the flies still floated lazily in the air, oblivious to the fragile drama unfolding in the sanctuary. Tomorrow would be another day of waiting—another day to prove that patience, even in the smallest dose, could be the difference between despair and recovery.
Amber chewed her mango slowly, her eyes never leaving the man who refused to give up on her. Somewhere deep inside, a trust was beginning to take root.
And Marc knew, without needing to say it, that was worth the wait.
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